Monday, September 13, 2010

Retroactive Continuity III














So I have just gone through and edited both my blogs again. In retrospect, my second round of edits was no where near as thorough as I had hoped, and as such, I found many errors that were left unnoticed. Although my latest edit should have corrected many of these errors and standardized the blogs in consistency, there are, without a doubt, errors still present because I spent a mere week to edit some two hundred posts.

The latest changes include:
  • adding color to GUPS posts
  • capitalizing select words (such as jobs, crafts, game stats, etc.) that I wanted to differentiate from their real-life meanings
  • editing paragraphs to be more cohesive and coherent 
  • fixing incorrect math formulas and explanations
  • attempting to fix incorrect comma and quotation usage
  • use formal English 
  • proofreading every post a minimum of three times
For the most part, I have kept most of the old content or reworded it to better reflect what I wanted to say. Occasionally, posts would have random tidbits or thoughts that were designed to be cute, but often, these were unrelated to the rest of the post. I have either moved or removed these sentences for cohesive purposes, as stated above.

Hopefully, the blogs will present new and old readers alike something wonderful to read/reread, and if you happen to spot the grammatical errors that I have overlooked, feel free to leave a comment or send an email -- I love corrections.

Monday, April 26, 2010

Retroactive Continuity II














I am free; free at last from another year of university! Whew. Before I get around to updating again, I will be doing another sweep of my blogs to further edit my grammar and spelling. But wait, why is a second edit needed? Well, I suppose after taking a full year's worth of writing courses, I have realized that I have made plenty of grammatical errors in the past, so my posts were probably awful to read. I will also be adjusting my pictures a little because Blogger has released a new and improved text editor. So bear with me people; I am breaking out the grammar gloves and digging into three years' worth of old posts!

Checklist
Snippy's Playbox: Complete
Snippy's Den: Complete
Snippy's Den 2: Complete

Last updated: 05/08/2010